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  1. Posted: May 4, 2017In: Drama

    A young man who’s a first generation Mexican-American citizen falls in love with a beautiful Syrian refugee, their love Must overcome her strict Muslim family and all the cultural gaps between their two worlds…

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    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on May 4, 2017 at 12:28 pm

    I think the love story with the cultural gap cliche won't be enough for a whole feature these days. Suggest even another antagonistic character or force introduced along with the culture divide. I mean, cultures co-exist all the time these days and frankly, the premise is getting a wee old, imo.

    I think the love story with the cultural gap cliche won’t be enough for a whole feature these days. Suggest even another antagonistic character or force introduced along with the culture divide. I mean, cultures co-exist all the time these days and frankly, the premise is getting a wee old, imo.

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  2. Posted: May 3, 2017In: Drama

    A desperately lonely woman is unknowingly trapped in purgatory until her grieving husband is finally able to let her go

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    Added an answer on May 4, 2017 at 7:45 am

    If your story does not have the correct components to form a decent logline, it could be that your story is faulty and that sucks. What doesn't suck is that you can use a solid log premise and adjust your story where perhaps the rewrite will save it.

    If your story does not have the correct components to form a decent logline, it could be that your story is faulty and that sucks. What doesn’t suck is that you can use a solid log premise and adjust your story where perhaps the rewrite will save it.

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  3. Posted: May 4, 2017In: Family

    Short Film: An old black man living in a quiet retirement home finds a record player than, when used, makes the listener(s) young again..

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on May 4, 2017 at 3:29 am

    I like the concept. Sounds a bit familiar. Has it been showcased on other screenplay sites such as Simply Scripts or the like?

    I like the concept. Sounds a bit familiar. Has it been showcased on other screenplay sites such as Simply Scripts or the like?

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