1. Posted: May 3, 2017In:

    Two sleazy disgraceful cops become unlikely heroes in their last-ditch effort to save their jobs and the damaged reputation of their department by vowing to take down a powerful drug and sex trafficking operation they?re steady customers of.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter

    If they are already disgraced then why would the audience want to root for these guys? After they infiltrate the operation, what next, what are they to overcome and what if they don't?

    If they are already disgraced then why would the audience want to root for these guys? After they infiltrate the operation, what next, what are they to overcome and what if they don’t?

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  2. Posted: May 3, 2017In:

    Trapped in an isolated mansion by paranormal forces from the dark world of Irish mythology, an estate appraiser and her team face death as they struggle to unravel a gruesome, long-buried secret.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter

    Sounds like a different angle, but what must the appraisers do by the end of the story and what are the consequences if they don't?

    Sounds like a different angle, but what must the appraisers do by the end of the story and what are the consequences if they don’t?

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  3. Posted: May 2, 2017In:

    A color blind pianist makes it rain every time he plays his symphonies. One melody at a time, he fills colors in the lives of people who listen to him play. On his last show, he mistakenly opens the door to his painful past. If the show must go on, he has to face his demons and let the light prevail.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter

    This is a minor plot summary and not a logline. Suggest that you check out the site's resources located on the left panel and think about which issues will drive your story to interest.

    This is a minor plot summary and not a logline. Suggest that you check out the site’s resources located on the left panel and think about which issues will drive your story to interest.

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