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When he sees the teacher who sexually assaulted him as a child, a young executive’s memories of years of abuse flood back and he embarks on a mission to protect other boys, only to discover what he really seeks is to avenge his abused friend?s suicide.
This sounds like the movie SLEEPERS with Brad Pitt.
This sounds like the movie SLEEPERS with Brad Pitt.
See lessRework: When an Australian find of Nazi-confiscated, priceless coins is stolen in a double murder, a Police Detective must solve another forty year old crime to find the culprit.
Missing a few things here. The Incit Inc falls upon the rather generic protag. You completely fail to describe the stakes or urgency of the cold case that I assume is the main part of the story. Give me more about your protag, what he's up against and what forces are working against him. He? MUST soRead more
Missing a few things here.
The Incit Inc falls upon the rather generic protag. You completely fail to describe the stakes or urgency of the cold case that I assume is the main part of the story.
Give me more about your protag, what he’s up against and what forces are working against him. He? MUST solve the cold case, but why and how urgent is it to do?
The nazi coin element does interest me, but is it just there as a rouse, or does it have something to really do with the double murder? I hope it does.
See lessA hometown bound 60 year old veteran is forced to reunite with his family across stranger seas. Right when he is about to leave behind his home, he finds companionship in his 30 year old neighbor. But when the inevitable D day arrives, he must lose one family to gain another.
As Russel mentions, step back and create that tv-guide description before you hit the info button to learn more. As you have so far, I can't begin to think what's important in your story to formulate helpful advice.
As Russel mentions, step back and create that tv-guide description before you hit the info button to learn more.
As you have so far, I can’t begin to think what’s important in your story to formulate helpful advice.
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