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Sick of being ridiculed at, A down on the luck super hero sets 24 hours to solve any case .
Don't forget, you will need time in your story to demo the superpowers.
Don’t forget, you will need time in your story to demo the superpowers.
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Both good advice and examples of how to improve things.
Both good advice and examples of how to improve things.
See lessTo find his cancer treatment, a broke man goes after a serial killer who has a large bounty placed on his head .
This has a critical error as written. He will not FIND his cancer treatment if he catches the killer, he will FUND his potential treatment after bringing him to justice. Otherwise, interesting premise. I'd find a way to introduce the ticking clock into this to make the urgency drive the story somehoRead more
This has a critical error as written. He will not FIND his cancer treatment if he catches the killer, he will FUND his potential treatment after bringing him to justice.
Otherwise, interesting premise. I’d find a way to introduce the ticking clock into this to make the urgency drive the story somehow.
Perhaps he needs to also out race a posse?
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