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  1. Posted: February 13, 2018In: Comedy

    After a fluke undercover drug bust saves their jobs, repairs the department?s damaged reputation and turns them into unlikely heroes, two sleazy and morally bankrupt city cops are targeted by the dangerous drug syndicate they accidentally swindled.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on February 13, 2018 at 8:08 am

    Craig's version is a streamlined improvement, but we are still at a point where there is a weak goal -- keep the corruption hidden. That could go one forever. I suggest you think about the workable goal that will have an obvious outcome, rather success or failure.

    Craig’s version is a streamlined improvement, but we are still at a point where there is a weak goal — keep the corruption hidden. That could go one forever. I suggest you think about the workable goal that will have an obvious outcome, rather success or failure.

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  2. Posted: February 13, 2018In: Drama

    A secretly psychic troubleshooter, after”seeing” an old Nazi secret is part of the trouble she has to “shoot”, has to decide if she can live with it.

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    Added an answer on February 13, 2018 at 5:40 am

    Why did you decide to use quotations 2x in one sentence? Part of the trouble? Live with? I don't understand who or which you are referring. Plus 1 star for Nazi secret though.

    Why did you decide to use quotations 2x in one sentence?

    Part of the trouble? Live with? I don’t understand who or which you are referring.

    Plus 1 star for Nazi secret though.

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  3. Posted: February 12, 2018In: Horror

    1969. While a family ‘s listening to the television that says the words: One small step for a man one giant leap for mankind, a misterious figure in a space suit steps in their house to tell them the truth about the moon landing.

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    Added an answer on February 13, 2018 at 12:56 am

    Agreed. Solid stories tell interesting stuff about characters surrounded by the fun and games. Focus on them and then the hook and take it as far as needed so that the potential audience wants to know more.

    Agreed. Solid stories tell interesting stuff about characters surrounded by the fun and games. Focus on them and then the hook and take it as far as needed so that the potential audience wants to know more.

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