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When unknowingly a lottery salesman sells a winning ticket, he continues his eternal battle to survive, living in his beach cavern, and crosses the path of an interesting fauna of people ? amongst whom the winner.
* don't have enough to work with. Sorry.
* don’t have enough to work with. Sorry.
See lessWhen unknowingly a lottery salesman sells a winning ticket, he continues his eternal battle to survive, living in his beach cavern, and crosses the path of an interesting fauna of people ? amongst whom the winner.
Just because you didn't actually win the lottery, doesn't mean you must survive from the incident. Winning is not a threat to overcome, it is simply the reward. He is a salesman, so why is he deprived of winning if the ticket crossed his hands? You are failing to hook the audience with something forRead more
Just because you didn’t actually win the lottery, doesn’t mean you must survive from the incident. Winning is not a threat to overcome, it is simply the reward. He is a salesman, so why is he deprived of winning if the ticket crossed his hands?
You are failing to hook the audience with something for the protagonist to root for. This story appears to need a romantic element as the real quest for the protagonist.
As this is, I would think you have enough of a story to work with with for a feature.
See lessA group of fishermen must save their lives from bloodthirsty unseen supernatural being, after their fishing boat runs aground in misty sea.
"a group of fisherman' Don't use "must save their lives" when you can use "survive" I would simply say "after running aground," no need to mention the mist. Definitely mention the father and son somehow. Unseen predator suggests ghost or spirit. Clean this up and it sounds like something I would wanRead more
“a group of fisherman’
Don’t use “must save their lives” when you can use “survive”
I would simply say “after running aground,” no need to mention the mist.
Definitely mention the father and son somehow. Unseen predator suggests ghost or spirit.
Clean this up and it sounds like something I would want to see.
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