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Desperate to keep her sister out of the drug trade a jaded girl makes one last drug run for her dealer who has set her up for a hit mistakenly suspecting she is a confidential informant.
I don't like it. It's not bad, but I don't care for the drug repeated 2 times. It also needs more of a goal for the MC. Best I can think of at the moment. Desperate to save her sister from a drug dealer, a jaded girl is mistaken for a police informant and finds herself running from a bounty placed oRead more
I don’t like it. It’s not bad, but I don’t care for the drug repeated 2 times. It also needs more of a goal for the MC.
Best I can think of at the moment.
Desperate to save her sister from a drug dealer, a jaded girl is mistaken for a police informant and finds herself running from a bounty placed on her head.
See lessWhen a wretched teenage Jewish boy in Auschwitz camp realizes his infatuation with Hitler?s daughter since their encounter in his village, by sneaking in her villa he stands to confess his love and induce her to save the Jews escape from the Germans.
After thinking about this ... I think Hitler's dauhter would make the better protagonist. She is the one that must struggle with right and wrong between her father and the new love ingerest. Meeting him would be her inciting incident. So much more to explore this way. What young actress wouldn't wanRead more
After thinking about this …
I think Hitler’s dauhter would make the better protagonist. She is the one that must struggle with right and wrong between her father and the new love ingerest.
Meeting him would be her inciting incident.
So much more to explore this way. What young actress wouldn’t want to take on this role?
See lessAfter sneaking out to attend the party of the year only to have things go horribly wrong, the straight-laced daughter of the police chief must employ criminal tactics to avoid being caught by the cops.
Sloan, Try to give us something more, in other words, what is her goal other than being caught? Attending a party is hardly a life changing accomplishment. How does something go horribly wrong? Criminal tactics, I get where your going here, just wondering if this could be written better. I'm sure onRead more
Sloan,
Try to give us something more, in other words, what is her goal other than being caught? Attending a party is hardly a life changing accomplishment. How does something go horribly wrong?
Criminal tactics, I get where your going here, just wondering if this could be written better.
I’m sure once the cops realize she is the chief’s daughter, they won’t prosecute her, unless they want to deal with the chief.
Straight laced? As opposed to crooked laced?
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