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  1. Posted: August 23, 2017In: Drama

    After a twister transports a lonely Kansas farm girl to a magical land, she sets out on a dangerous journey to find a wizard with the powers to send her home.

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    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on August 24, 2017 at 1:28 am

    I don't think back then they said twister much. Replace it with tornado, perhaps? She really isn't that lonely, she has her dog, maybe work that in instead?

    I don’t think back then they said twister much. Replace it with tornado, perhaps? She really isn’t that lonely, she has her dog, maybe work that in instead?

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  2. Posted: August 23, 2017In: Thriller

    A troubled young woman, tying to outrun an oppressive past, flees to the outback, only to find herself in the way of an ancient malevolent spirit awakened by a thirst for revenge and hell bent on destruction.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on August 24, 2017 at 1:06 am

    As Richiev suggests, option 2 seems to be the better approach. An oppressed woman runs from her past only to find she must stop a vengeful spirit before it destroys everything in its path.

    As Richiev suggests, option 2 seems to be the better approach.

    An oppressed woman runs from her past only to find she must stop a vengeful spirit before it destroys everything in its path.

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  3. Posted: August 23, 2017In: Thriller

    A troubled young woman, tying to outrun an oppressive past, flees to the outback, only to find herself in the way of an ancient malevolent spirit awakened by a thirst for revenge and hell bent on destruction.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on August 23, 2017 at 10:45 am

    She's troubled, oppressed, running away from everything and then just happens to find herself in the path of a revenge-seeking supernatural? Why does it want to get revenge on her? Describe the prot a different, yet relative to having the skills of completing the goal, while focusing on her fight wiRead more

    She’s troubled, oppressed, running away from everything and then just happens to find herself in the path of a revenge-seeking supernatural? Why does it want to get revenge on her?

    Describe the prot a different, yet relative to having the skills of completing the goal, while focusing on her fight with the spirit, what needs to be overcome or else something bad will happen.

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