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  1. Posted: August 20, 2017In: Fantasy

    After a police station is attacked, a supernatural mercenary in custody must work with mundane cops to defend it from a group of faeries seeking the powerful artifact she stole.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on August 20, 2017 at 8:19 pm

    A police precinct must trust a prisoner with helping them survive an attack from supernatural fairies seeking an ancient artifact.

    A police precinct must trust a prisoner with helping them survive an attack from supernatural fairies seeking an ancient artifact.

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  2. Posted: August 17, 2017In: SciFi

    A retired astronaut must overcome an emotional disability to save seven world leaders trapped inside of a crippled space station before it crashes to Earth.

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    Added an answer on August 19, 2017 at 8:26 am

    All great advice and points taken with validity. I wrote this with family as the main component that drives the will to survive. I simply put people in harms way and force them to deal with more crap after even more crap. Currently, it is battling in the page awards semi-final round. Logline wise, IRead more

    All great advice and points taken with validity. I wrote this with family as the main component that drives the will to survive. I simply put people in harms way and force them to deal with more crap after even more crap.

    Currently, it is battling in the page awards semi-final round.

    Logline wise, I never felt good about my choices or any newer versions. It is currently using:

    A retired astronaut must overcome an emotional impairment to help save seven world leaders trapped on a crippled space station before it crashes to Earth.

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  3. Posted: August 16, 2017In: Noir

    When an emo-themed magazine is accused of causing a rash of suicides among young girls, a new editor is hired to change its editorial direction. Before starting, the new editor decides to dig deeper into the past editor?s affairs and discovers that an inmate, who believes she was wrongly accused of murder by the neighbor?s babysitter, was controlling the magazine from prison.

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    Roberto, This plot is all over the place. For the logline purposes, you need to break things down to their raw essence. A magazine editor is hired to repair the image of a troubled publication until realizing... Now what is the goal and stakes? You don't have much space to get this done. 1-2 lines.Read more

    Roberto,

    This plot is all over the place. For the logline purposes, you need to break things down to their raw essence.

    A magazine editor is hired to repair the image of a troubled publication until realizing…

    Now what is the goal and stakes? You don’t have much space to get this done. 1-2 lines. 1 is better.

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