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When a widow realizes that the ongoing completion of her late husband?s life?s work — an adventure park — is depleting her entire inheritance, she decides to integrate a working village in the park to generate income and inadvertently attracts a cult.
Good, but what must her goal be in regards to the cult? Danger? What's the risk there to overcome? That's the real story, IMO.
Good, but what must her goal be in regards to the cult? Danger? What’s the risk there to overcome? That’s the real story, IMO.
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Robert, Your logline presents a setup for a plot. It needs to illustrate a main character, an inciting incident, and what must be done before something happens to change an outcome forever. I suggest that you check out the formula advice linked to this page. Good luck
Robert,
Your logline presents a setup for a plot. It needs to illustrate a main character, an inciting incident, and what must be done before something happens to change an outcome forever.
I suggest that you check out the formula advice linked to this page.
Good luck
See lessWhen a commune agrees to full coverage in a TV program, the group’s newest member, on the lam from media attacks that led to a family murder, devices a plan to sabotage the TV’s plan to protect his identity.
Robert, Your logline presents a setup for a plot. It needs to illustrate a main character, an inciting incident, and what must be done before something happens to change an outcome forever. I suggest that you check out the formula advice linked to this page. Good luck.
Robert,
Your logline presents a setup for a plot. It needs to illustrate a main character, an inciting incident, and what must be done before something happens to change an outcome forever.
I suggest that you check out the formula advice linked to this page.
Good luck.
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