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When their squad car crashes in no-man?s land, a small-town cop and a convicted murderer find themselves handcuffed together, and trapped in a battle for survival.
In addition to dpg's point, we can surmise that the handcuffed aspect stands out in this log. That's good. How important it is to even ?mention it in the log is debatable. I think you should focus on the environment the MC finds himself in. No man's land can be improved upon, as well as what cop andRead more
In addition to dpg’s point, we can surmise that the handcuffed aspect stands out in this log. That’s good. How important it is to even ?mention it in the log is debatable.
I think you should focus on the environment the MC finds himself in. No man’s land can be improved upon, as well as what cop and convict are running away from to ultimately survive. Here is a chance to suggest what this story could truly offer, including something ironic.
The intimacy of being together for a majority of the story, and a cop then having to save his prisoner or rely on him or her for help should be expected, as well as the stakes.
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Joker, Unfortunately, I am unable to comprehend your logline. I recommend rewriting. I suspect that English is not your native tongue, however, that shouldn't stand in the way of you organizing a clear and concise description. I suggest you read the formula or copy some of your favorite examples. GoRead more
Joker,
Unfortunately, I am unable to comprehend your logline. I recommend rewriting. I suspect that English is not your native tongue, however, that shouldn’t stand in the way of you organizing a clear and concise description. I suggest you read the formula or copy some of your favorite examples.
Good luck.
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"oppressive family of assassins" sounds odd. They kill, not oppress. If he was a failed experiment, wouldn't they have terminated him already? A young boy must escape from a failed genetic program designed to weaponize human beings into super soldiers before he is terminated.
“oppressive family of assassins” sounds odd. They kill, not oppress. If he was a failed experiment, wouldn’t they have terminated him already?
A young boy must escape from a failed genetic program designed to weaponize human beings into super soldiers before he is terminated.
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