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  1. Posted: August 4, 2017In: Comedy

    Terrified of his parents suspicions, a freshly outed gay high school senior must get a girlfriend so his parents will think he is straight.

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    Added an answer on August 4, 2017 at 5:36 am

    Boy, I feel bad for his potential date. Here she's thinking she's scoring a great guy, but he's really a liar and user. Gonna be hard to root for that guy. Great advice so far. ?I can see this having some great potential for funny moments since it is a comedy. Ask yourself what the morale of this stRead more

    Boy, I feel bad for his potential date. Here she’s thinking she’s scoring a great guy, but he’s really a liar and user. Gonna be hard to root for that guy.

    Great advice so far. ?I can see this having some great potential for funny moments since it is a comedy.

    Ask yourself what the morale of this story really is and what you want to convey, and be sure you reflect that when the curtain drops. I would want him to really stand up for his sexual feelings/choices and come out the better person for it.

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  2. Posted: July 30, 2017In: Adventure

    After an asteroid hits the earth and wipes out half the planet, a scientist must find a way to keep humanity from freezing to death by harnessing the earth’s core.

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    Added an answer on July 31, 2017 at 10:47 pm

    A scientist is tasked with saving what's left of the Earth's population after an asteroid collision claims half of its habitable surface.

    A scientist is tasked with saving what’s left of the Earth’s population after an asteroid collision claims half of its habitable surface.

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  3. Posted: July 30, 2017In: Fantasy

    When a portal to hell mysteriously opens, an inexperienced mage born of the hellish dimension, is the only one who can close it and bring peace to the kingdom.

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    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on July 31, 2017 at 10:40 pm

    Dk makes a point that this has sound elements, however, it reads poorly. I would remove that 2nd comma and speed up the read or rework it a bit altogether. After a hell portal opens, a young mage is tasked with finding a way to close it before a great kingdom is completely destroyed.

    Dk makes a point that this has sound elements, however, it reads poorly. I would remove that 2nd comma and speed up the read or rework it a bit altogether.

    After a hell portal opens, a young mage is tasked with finding a way to close it before a great kingdom is completely destroyed.

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