1. Posted: August 6, 2017In:

    [Not a logline] Does the dark night of the soul occur in act 2, act 3 or in a secret middle place?

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter

    I would bet that's up to you and where you feel it belongs in reference to your story. I assume you are referring to the dark night of the MC and no one else?

    I would bet that’s up to you and where you feel it belongs in reference to your story. I assume you are referring to the dark night of the MC and no one else?

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  2. Posted: August 4, 2017In:

    after-surviving-a-serial-killer-attack-thanks-to-the-donated-organs-of-three-girls-arata-must-remember-the-identity-of-the-murder-who-attacked-him-while-the-spirits-of-the-girls-of-its-new-organs-fol

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter

    I'm not seeing anything in the topic. Is it me or was it deleted?

    I’m not seeing anything in the topic. Is it me or was it deleted?

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  3. Posted: August 4, 2017In:

    An Amature Drug-dealer decides to sell drugs by Dark Web, But he realizes it is not like he thought.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter

    Joker, Check out the formula link on the top of the site and compare it to your logline to see the elements that you are missing. I like to think GSU (goals,stakes,urgency) "Realizes it isn't how he thought" doesn't work for a logline. You need to get specific and accurate. Good luck.

    Joker,

    Check out the formula link on the top of the site and compare it to your logline to see the elements that you are missing.

    I like to think GSU (goals,stakes,urgency)

    “Realizes it isn’t how he thought” doesn’t work for a logline. You need to get specific and accurate.

    Good luck.

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