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Set in a near future where teacher’s carry firearms, a divorced high school educator shoots her least favorite student when he breaks her young daughter’s heart. (Negligent Discharge)
Rogerk, The emotional tension from the gun issue is worth exploring. You are using the incident to set your story in motion but it sounds as though you are then switching to the relationship between adult and child. How does the hot gun issue come into play after that? Or does it? Also, It's confusiRead more
Rogerk,
The emotional tension from the gun issue is worth exploring. You are using the incident to set your story in motion but it sounds as though you are then switching to the relationship between adult and child. How does the hot gun issue come into play after that? Or does it?
Also,
It’s confusing who the “her” is, and later it switches to “him.” What sex is the teacher? As Richiev asks, what must the MC accomplish then? A campaign to stop gun violence? A mission to take away everyone’s guns?
See lessA young and lonely businessman wants to find true happiness in order to give his life more purpose and standing in his way is only himself.
Well, for God's sake, each one of us is always standing in the way of giving ourselves more purpose and finding true happiness. What's the outside influence this guy needs to defeat in order to achieve a goal? How long does this movie follow this guy's life until he acquires happiness? This needs aRead more
Well, for God’s sake, each one of us is always standing in the way of giving ourselves more purpose and finding true happiness. What’s the outside influence this guy needs to defeat in order to achieve a goal? How long does this movie follow this guy’s life until he acquires happiness?
This needs a lot of work.
See lessWhen an anxious recluse agrees to take his cancer-fighting friend on one last adventure, he doesn?t bank on having his beliefs, loyalties and survival skills challenged when she falls fatally ill.
Why does the MC have to agree to take his friend on a trip? Why are you revealing that it is their last trip and how do they know? And of course, which one falls ill on the trip? That part is not entirely clear as mentioned above.
Why does the MC have to agree to take his friend on a trip? Why are you revealing that it is their last trip and how do they know? And of course, which one falls ill on the trip? That part is not entirely clear as mentioned above.
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