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A rapidly spreading sickness causes a suicidal teenager to put aside her intentions to save her loved ones.
The re-writes are a machete when we need a scalpel. A troubled teen?must somehow help her family survive inside of a quarantine zone until the cure for a mysterious illness can be found. I don't see any reason to reveal that she is suicidal. If she is, fine. Have her deal with it inside of the storyRead more
The re-writes are a machete when we need a scalpel.
A troubled teen?must somehow help her family survive inside of a quarantine zone until the cure for a mysterious illness can be found.
I don’t see any reason to reveal that she is suicidal. If she is, fine. Have her deal with it inside of the story. Usually, in sci-fi stories like this, the MC has the cure lingering inside of their body somehow. If this is not the case here, I still fail to see how a teenager will save the day in the end, but hey, I hope the OP has figured it out somehow and this gets made.
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Dj, Clarify this for me. Is Briana quarantined and confined in her apt along with her family members? If so, and there is a legitimate reason for this, such as a danger, shouldn't the MC be more worried about solving that issue vs fighting with her family? Always try to have the MC rally against theRead more
Dj,
Clarify this for me. Is Briana quarantined and confined in her apt along with her family members? If so, and there is a legitimate reason for this, such as a danger, shouldn’t the MC be more worried about solving that issue vs fighting with her family?
Always try to have the MC rally against the Inciting incident, rather than them going after something else.
See lessA rapidly spreading sickness causes a suicidal teenager to put aside her intentions to save her loved ones.
Dk,True, there are good examples such as lethal weapon, but Riggs was an adult who already had a major loss after a successful marriage. A teenager who wants to suicide is well, just that. I agree, uncoin this MC as "a suicidal teenager" because it sounds so pre destined ?and perhaps use "a gifted tRead more
Dk,
True, there are good examples such as lethal weapon, but Riggs was an adult who already had a major loss after a successful marriage. A teenager who wants to suicide is well, just that. I agree, uncoin this MC as “a suicidal teenager” because it sounds so pre destined ?and perhaps use “a gifted teenager, who lost her will to live” which may garner more sympathy.
Then there is the question of what a teenager can offer vs. a disease. Your log version certainly clears all the questions about plot. I hope the OP has this covered in their story.
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