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  1. Posted: July 12, 2017In: Comedy

    To repay a debt, a gravedigger is forced to use his cemetery to cover up mob hits, but when the law leans on him, he must work both sides to avoid prison… Or worse.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on July 12, 2017 at 8:28 am

    Interesting premise about covering for the mob with the cemetery. Problem I see is that we are rooting for an anti-hero gravedigger, who is obviously in the wrong. Also, cops "leaning" on a cemetery owner sounds strange, since murder is involved, I would assume they can just shut the operation down.Read more

    Interesting premise about covering for the mob with the cemetery.

    Problem I see is that we are rooting for an anti-hero gravedigger, who is obviously in the wrong. Also, cops “leaning” on a cemetery owner sounds strange, since murder is involved, I would assume they can just shut the operation down.

    What is the rainbow at the end of the story? Gravedigger wins and continues stealing from his own cemetery? Give us a few more details about the resolution so that we can help.

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  2. Posted: July 11, 2017In: Romance

    When a girl falls in love with an alien, she must fight to stop the government and developers from destroying the lake that keeps him alive. This is a mixed genre – Thriller/Sci-Fi/Romance.

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    Added an answer on July 12, 2017 at 6:51 am

    Yes, please stay with a single thread so that we can follow the progress made on the logline. Thx.

    Yes, please stay with a single thread so that we can follow the progress made on the logline. Thx.

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  3. Posted: July 11, 2017In: Thriller

    When a 20 year old girl inherits her family’s land surrounding a mysterious lake, she must fight developers to save both the lake and her alien boyfriend.

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    Added an answer on July 12, 2017 at 12:52 am

    Good advice, dpg. Often times I try to include multiple objectives within my logs to make things sound more meaty. I often go back to the log for Breaking Bad: A high school chemistry teacher diagnosed with inoperable lung cancer turns to manufacturing and selling methamphetamine in order to secureRead more

    Good advice, dpg. Often times I try to include multiple objectives within my logs to make things sound more meaty.

    I often go back to the log for Breaking Bad:

    A high school chemistry teacher diagnosed with inoperable lung cancer turns to manufacturing and selling methamphetamine in order to secure his family’s future.

    This just falls under the perfect category for me.

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