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  1. Posted: August 28, 2019In: Action

    In a world where people are segregated and opposed depending on their birth month, men born in the month of January every few years are sent to an isolated island to fight to the death to provide live entertainment to millions of worldwide viewers.

    giannisggeorgiou Samurai
    Added an answer on September 7, 2019 at 9:32 pm

    I agree that I find hard to get over how arbitrary the criterion for the segregation is. How do you justify it in your mind? Perhaps there is some meaning, but we don't see it yet. Plus, this world already exists: try getting a date if you are a Gemini in my country. Sorry, couldn't help it.

    I agree that I find hard to get over how arbitrary the criterion for the segregation is. How do you justify it in your mind? Perhaps there is some meaning, but we don’t see it yet.

    Plus, this world already exists: try getting a date if you are a Gemini in my country. Sorry, couldn’t help it.

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  2. Posted: September 1, 2019In: SciFi

    Five saviours of Earth are tested when strange, celestial fighters, now in their ultimate forms after taking twelve-hundred years to hatch from eggs, declare to destroy the Galaxy for the murder of their sibling.

    giannisggeorgiou Samurai
    Added an answer on September 7, 2019 at 7:52 pm

    I see that you have posted several log lines and all of them suffer in terms of plot. They all describe a starting point, the world of the story, but don't take it from there. You will get great help by checking out the formula people in here have been telling you, and then revisit your log line attRead more

    I see that you have posted several log lines and all of them suffer in terms of plot. They all describe a starting point, the world of the story, but don’t take it from there.

    You will get great help by checking out the formula people in here have been telling you, and then revisit your log line attempts and edit them.

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  3. Posted: August 31, 2019In: SciFi

    In time, the female menstrual cycle evolves to happen much less frequently, causing far fewer births. A twenty-second century witch-hunt begins when billions of people convince themselves that this is an ungodly occurrence.

    giannisggeorgiou Samurai
    Added an answer on September 7, 2019 at 7:28 pm

    I will agree with Mike and guide you towards the formula, as well. Not because we should all be members of a Formula-worshipping cult, but because this formula will really help you straighten out the spine of your story and write an effective log line.

    I will agree with Mike and guide you towards the formula, as well. Not because we should all be members of a Formula-worshipping cult, but because this formula will really help you straighten out the spine of your story and write an effective log line.

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