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When a struggling repo agent gets arrested, she is rescued and recruited by a mysterious business woman that specializes in acquiring and selling exotic, hard to find, mythical items to the highest bidder.
As Richiev says, no goal. Also, no conflict. All I know is that she gets RESCUED. Saved. Out of trouble. Where is the new trouble? You use a lot of words to describe the business woman: she is MYSTERIOUS and she SPECIALISES in ACQUIRING and SELLING EXOTIC, HARD TO FIND, MYTHICAL items. Try getting rRead more
As Richiev says, no goal. Also, no conflict. All I know is that she gets RESCUED. Saved. Out of trouble. Where is the new trouble?
You use a lot of words to describe the business woman: she is MYSTERIOUS and she SPECIALISES in ACQUIRING and SELLING EXOTIC, HARD TO FIND, MYTHICAL items. Try getting rid of most of those to make some space for the Goal.
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