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  1. Posted: June 23, 2018In: Horror

    When a local hotel hires a member on staff to be a ?professional sleeper? to test their bedding, he becomes haunted by a rusty old mattress.

    giannisggeorgiou Samurai
    Added an answer on September 15, 2018 at 7:14 am

    Why a professional sleeper? Why not a visitor/customer?

    Why a professional sleeper? Why not a visitor/customer?

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  2. Posted: September 11, 2018In: SciFi

    When a vengeful alien threatens to destroy Earth, a reluctant young drifter must live up to his father’s reputation as a Starfleet Captain and stop the invasion.

    giannisggeorgiou Samurai
    Added an answer on September 15, 2018 at 6:07 am

    It has clear objective and an evident inner motivation (the successful, glorious father, etc.). I like it and I think it works. Perhaps a little more specific info on the alien? Is it an "alien spaceship" or a whole "alien fleet?" Perhaps the drifter has to organise the Earth's fleet, to deal with aRead more

    It has clear objective and an evident inner motivation (the successful, glorious father, etc.). I like it and I think it works.

    Perhaps a little more specific info on the alien? Is it an “alien spaceship” or a whole “alien fleet?” Perhaps the drifter has to organise the Earth’s fleet, to deal with an invasion of a larger scale.

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  3. Posted: September 11, 2018In: Comedy

    When a failed real estate agent is threatened to be fired, he must sell a house no one else has succeeded in selling.

    giannisggeorgiou Samurai
    Added an answer on September 15, 2018 at 5:55 am

    I like the fact that it is "a house that no one else has succeeded in selling," thus how about adding "dreadful house" or something?Also, we could invent some reason that the estate agent gets blacklisted, as the inciting incident.Thus:When a rookie real estate agent blows an important deal, he getsRead more

    I like the fact that it is “a house that no one else has succeeded in selling,” thus how about adding “dreadful house” or something?

    Also, we could invent some reason that the estate agent gets blacklisted, as the inciting incident.

    Thus:

    When a rookie real estate agent blows an important deal, he gets 48 hours to sell a dreadful shack or the bank will foreclose on his own home.

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