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When a single mother investigates her son?s claim that he was murdered in his past life, she inadvertently implicates her self in the unsolved crime and becomes the number one suspect. To prove her innocence, they go on the run, determined to find the real killer before a hard as nails detective can bring them in.
Simplified: When a single mother investigates her toddler's claim that he was murdered in his previous life, she must solve the murder before she gets arrested as the prime suspect. And, yes, I know that toddler is small, but believe me, a 3-year-old could actually mention death. Plus, he can be a cRead more
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And, yes, I know that toddler is small, but believe me, a 3-year-old could actually mention death. Plus, he can be a charismatic 3-year-old.
Or whatever, you pick the age. 🙂
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It is really good! Sure, you can fix a few words here and there, but as a concept it makes me see and taste the whole movie, the conflict, the inner journey (he stays because he wants to save his own ass, but ends up saving the townsfolk -perhaps?). Cowboys and zombies, yum yum!
It is really good! Sure, you can fix a few words here and there, but as a concept it makes me see and taste the whole movie, the conflict, the inner journey (he stays because he wants to save his own ass, but ends up saving the townsfolk -perhaps?).
Cowboys and zombies, yum yum!
See lessWhen an MMA fighter finds out that her estranged country singing father has witnessed a murder and was injured resulting in amnesia, she must overcome her abandonment issues and protect him from the murderer.
I see that you have already rewritten several versions of the concept already. May I ask, what is the part that moves you most? Is it the fact that the daughter has to get over her resentment/issues with her father in order to save him? (Check out Indiana Jones and the Holy Grail, for a similar inneRead more
I see that you have already rewritten several versions of the concept already. May I ask, what is the part that moves you most?
Is it the fact that the daughter has to get over her resentment/issues with her father in order to save him? (Check out Indiana Jones and the Holy Grail, for a similar inner journey, by the way.)
Or what is it?
At the moment, it feels as if there are a few irrelevant elements forced into the logline, which do not necessarily make a dramatic cocktail.
I suggest you take a breath and see what moves you. This will determine what you can build on.
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