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An estranged couple decides for a last-chance counseling retreat in a forest just to meet a therapist who reveals their secrets that should rather have remained buried
Rutger, Lee, thank you very much for the quick and great comments! I tried to rephrase according to the suggestions/quesitons: - Alienated was chancged to estranged, not sure if this is a better reflection of a relationship gone cold after a couple of years? - Hiking therapy: not sure how to formulaRead more
Rutger, Lee, thank you very much for the quick and great comments! I tried to rephrase according to the suggestions/quesitons:
– Alienated was chancged to estranged, not sure if this is a better reflection of a relationship gone cold after a couple of years?
– Hiking therapy: not sure how to formulate this better: the couple decides for a hiking trip, where they could hopefully discuss their problems in a new setting outside the big city they live in.
– Horrific villain changed to masked psychopath.
– Evil looking dog changed to killer dog.
– Facing each other’s feelings changed to confront each other to survive.
Remained with two sentences, somehow I like it better this way now with all the other changes.
I found your comments very helpful, please let me know how you like the updated version!
See lessAfter his family is kidnapped and sold to English slavers by renegade Fante tribesmen, Ashanti tribal warrior Mwabo embarks on a perilous voyage across the Atlantic to the sugarcane plantations of modern day Jamaica in search of his wife and son, where he leads a slave rebellion against the tyrannical white masters to reclaim his family's freedom and liberate his fellow Africans from the misery of enslavement.
Hi - I am not sure based on the logline if this is a historical story? Slavery in Jamaica is history, am I correct? Why is modern-day Jamaica mentioned? Maybe I misunderstand. However if this is historical, is there a true event behind this? I only checked Wikipedia on the Ashanti tribe, and could nRead more
Hi – I am not sure based on the logline if this is a historical story? Slavery in Jamaica is history, am I correct? Why is modern-day Jamaica mentioned? Maybe I misunderstand.
However if this is historical, is there a true event behind this? I only checked Wikipedia on the Ashanti tribe, and could not find a mention on a rebel who traveled on his own will to Jamaica. The two famous rebel leaders mentioned there were both brought to Jamaica as slaves. If there was still a rebel leader who travelled to Jamaica on his own, the logline would be very simple, like “In year 17.. a young free Ashanti decided to sail to Jamaica and free his people from enslavement there”.
I’m afraid, if there is no true event behind this, it is not worth to elaborate the idea…
See lessBased on true events. “On holiday, a vain German Luftwaffe officer and his family forget to disembark their train and end up in a Nazi dead camp, not keen on uninvited visitors.?
Hi Rutger, I think what you wrote as synopsis is just the right one!! I don't think anyone would ban it because of the number of words.
Hi Rutger, I think what you wrote as synopsis is just the right one!! I don’t think anyone would ban it because of the number of words.
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