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In time, the female menstrual cycle evolves to happen much less frequently, causing far fewer births. A twenty-second century witch-hunt begins when billions of people convince themselves that this is an ungodly occurrence.
UPDATE 1: The human female reproductive system evolves so that menstrual cycles happen only once a year, causing far fewer births. A twenty-second century witch-hunt begins, forcing women to revert back to primitive eating habits.
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The human female reproductive system evolves so that menstrual cycles happen only once a year, causing far fewer births. A twenty-second century witch-hunt begins, forcing women to revert back to primitive eating habits.
See lessA Caribbean D?butante en route to genteel refinement in Paris is hijacked to an Ottoman harem,…where life lessons far exceed anything she would have learned in school.
Honestly, I had no idea what's being displayed in the first half of your logline after my first read-through due to the terminology you use. Try changing 'Debutante', 'genteel refinement', and 'Ottoman harem' to words more commonly understood. The second half of your logline: 'where life lessons farRead more
Honestly, I had no idea what’s being displayed in the first half of your logline after my first read-through due to the terminology you use. Try changing ‘Debutante’, ‘genteel refinement’, and ‘Ottoman harem’ to words more commonly understood. The second half of your logline: ‘where life lessons far exceed anything she would have learned in school’ is great and piques my interest.
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I love the concept, though the first two sentences could be condensed while still giving all the same info essentially. Perhaps try something along the lines of: 'Humanity has evolved to a point where pregnant women always carry multiple children, and only the best sibling will live.' For your finalRead more
I love the concept, though the first two sentences could be condensed while still giving all the same info essentially. Perhaps try something along the lines of: ‘Humanity has evolved to a point where pregnant women always carry multiple children, and only the best sibling will live.’
For your final sentence, I would drop the lead’s name, change ‘love interest’ to ‘woman he loves’,? and ‘selected as the weaker one’ could be shortened to ‘deemed unworthy (or weak).’
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