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The whole country watches in horror and chaos ensues as all efforts seem to go in vain trying to rescue a little boy who falls into an abandoned deep tube well.
I like the concept, it reminds me of The Simpsons, though there is a lot of potential for actual drama. A lot of this logline can be shortened to make room for more pivotal information to entice the reader further. Instead of 'seem to go in vain' you could simply put 'fail in', and 'falls into an abRead more
I like the concept, it reminds me of The Simpsons, though there is a lot of potential for actual drama. A lot of this logline can be shortened to make room for more pivotal information to entice the reader further. Instead of ‘seem to go in vain’ you could simply put ‘fail in’, and ‘falls into an abandoned deep tube well’ could be ‘fell into an abandoned well’.
See less“Following the release of a popular drug that makes sleep obsolete, some people start committing crimes in waking-dreams known as ‘Recals’ and a Dream-Detective must determine the lucidity of each suspect while secretly investigating with his own recurring Recal.” (1 Hour TV Scifi/Drama Series) Updated Version.
I love the concept! Very original. I recommend something much shorter along the lines of: 'A popular drug makes sleep obsolete. Side effects include waking dreams, known as Recals. A specialist determines the levels of lucidity of criminals, while investigating his own recurring Recal.'
I love the concept! Very original. I recommend something much shorter along the lines of: ‘A popular drug makes sleep obsolete. Side effects include waking dreams, known as Recals. A specialist determines the levels of lucidity of criminals, while investigating his own recurring Recal.’
See lessBillions of refugees seek shelter from deadly weather events, antibiotics have lost their potency, nations wage wars over land and water, and activists not opposed to violence towards humans try to save animals from extinction.
UPDATE 1: A famous philosopher inspires much violence, an army of activists kill to save animals, and a race-car driver travels at untested light-speed to cool down the globe by inducing a second Ice Age.
UPDATE 1: A famous philosopher inspires much violence, an army of activists kill to save animals, and a race-car driver travels at untested light-speed to cool down the globe by inducing a second Ice Age.
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