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  1. Posted: April 8, 2018In: Comedy

    Edited: When an seasoned womanizer transforms his female best friend from a clinger to a player and finds himself attracted to his new creation, but realizes the repercussions of his teachings is worst than he imagined. Don’t know if this one is better than my previous attempt.

    henb Samurai
    Added an answer on June 2, 2019 at 9:02 pm

    I would try to shorten the first half of your logline, and use the space to expand on 'but realizes the repercussions of his teachings is worst (worse) than he imagined.' I would change your logline to something more like this: A seasoned womanizer transforms his female friend from clingy to player.Read more

    I would try to shorten the first half of your logline, and use the space to expand on ‘but realizes the repercussions of his teachings is worst (worse) than he imagined.’

    I would change your logline to something more like this: A seasoned womanizer transforms his female friend from clingy to player. He becomes attracted to his creation, who is now too suave and sophisticated for the likes of him.

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  2. Posted: May 31, 2019In: SciFi

    A young aspiring musician discovers that the English language reveals a conspiracy, which he utilizes to make himself a star. He learns the rich and famous are given strange powers for their so called accomplishments.

    henb Samurai
    Added an answer on June 1, 2019 at 1:40 am

    UPDATED LOGLINE (2):A young musician discovers that the English language reveals a conspiracy, which he utilizes to make himself a star. He competes with other celebrities, vying for power over the fate of the world?s largest fanbase.

    UPDATED LOGLINE (2):

    A young musician discovers that the English language reveals a conspiracy, which he utilizes to make himself a star. He competes with other celebrities, vying for power over the fate of the world?s largest fanbase.

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  3. Posted: May 31, 2019In: SciFi

    A young aspiring musician discovers that the English language reveals a conspiracy, which he utilizes to make himself a star. He learns the rich and famous are given strange powers for their so called accomplishments.

    henb Samurai
    Added an answer on June 1, 2019 at 1:04 am

    UPDATED LOGLINE (1): Utilizing a conspiracy found in all languages, there are words inside of words, celebrities are made famous. All of them yearn to become the richest and most influential, and achieve the title of Chosen Decider.

    UPDATED LOGLINE (1):

    Utilizing a conspiracy found in all languages, there are words inside of words, celebrities are made famous. All of them yearn to become the richest and most influential, and achieve the title of Chosen Decider.

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