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Death has been conquered, adrenalin drained at the point of death creates the immortality pill used by the rich and privalged. God sickened by the murder of innocents unleashes his wraith on the immortals.
It sounds unusual. I'm honestly not sure what to think. Maybe it would be better if one of the people in the prison camps becomes our hero and triumphs over the evil instead of a soldier sent down from god. That might make it more exciting.
It sounds unusual. I’m honestly not sure what to think. Maybe it would be better if one of the people in the prison camps becomes our hero and triumphs over the evil instead of a soldier sent down from god. That might make it more exciting.
See lessRomantic comedy about two competitive best-seling authors – who hate each other, are thrust together by circumstance while competing to be a writer for the most successful magazines in the country.
First off, don't put romantic comedy or the genre in your logline. It should be for the most part clear what the genre is without you stating it. If you wanted to state it in the description below, that's fine. I think the set up is interesting but I'd like to know what circumstances make them stuckRead more
First off, don’t put romantic comedy or the genre in your logline. It should be for the most part clear what the genre is without you stating it. If you wanted to state it in the description below, that’s fine.
I think the set up is interesting but I’d like to know what circumstances make them stuck together.
See lessAfter losing his job, Nathan wants to destroy the world economy causing millions of job losses; Things change when people are hurt.
The logline makes me not like the character. Why would he want to destroy the world economy? Out of revenge? How would that help anything? Also, how would him losing his job make him come to this decision. And how would he destroy the worlds economy? Right now it's a bit vague.
The logline makes me not like the character. Why would he want to destroy the world economy? Out of revenge? How would that help anything? Also, how would him losing his job make him come to this decision. And how would he destroy the worlds economy? Right now it’s a bit vague.
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