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A vampire and vampire slayer living as roommates, hiding their identity, are secretly trying to kill each other, but fall in love in the process.
I ended up adding more detail to my logline since it was probably too vague before. Either I make my loglines too vague or too detailed. "A vampire finds a new female roommate for a fresh kill, except she's a vampire slayer in training who must kill her first vampire as her final test, but unnaturalRead more
I ended up adding more detail to my logline since it was probably too vague before. Either I make my loglines too vague or too detailed.
“A vampire finds a new female roommate for a fresh kill, except she’s a vampire slayer in training who must kill her first vampire as her final test, but unnatural feelings grow between them.”
I guess this would be considered a dark romantic comedy.
Two roommates, a vampire and one vampire slayer
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I still think it's a little too vague. I def get that it's a slice of life drama. If your characters don't have any real goals than the characters might be too passive and not assertive enough. You could incorporate that they want to go for their dreams and put that in it. I'm having the same probleRead more
I still think it’s a little too vague. I def get that it’s a slice of life drama. If your characters don’t have any real goals than the characters might be too passive and not assertive enough. You could incorporate that they want to go for their dreams and put that in it.
I’m having the same problem with my logline. I think it’s way too vague and I need to be more specific.
See lessA vampire and vampire slayer living as roommates, hiding their identity, are secretly trying to kill each other, but fall in love in the process.
This would be a dual protagonist movie and I have a pretty good way of writing it so I think it'll work. That's why I wrote the two main characters in my logline. Maybe I'm not giving enough information in the logline to make it clear enough? I wanted to do my own interpretation of the genre so to mRead more
This would be a dual protagonist movie and I have a pretty good way of writing it so I think it’ll work. That’s why I wrote the two main characters in my logline. Maybe I’m not giving enough information in the logline to make it clear enough?
I wanted to do my own interpretation of the genre so to me, this will stand out because I know my version of it hasn’t been done before.
This is supposed to be a comedy. I’m not sure how that should come across in my logline though because you have to explain the story in as little words as possible.
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