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  1. Posted: April 28, 2013In: Public

    After a young heiress unleashes primal powers, she is visited by a mysterious stranger and learns she must take on interdimensional beings that want her dead.

    jde Penpusher
    Added an answer on April 29, 2013 at 3:20 am

    I get now where I should be going with this. Thanks so much for your help!

    I get now where I should be going with this. Thanks so much for your help!

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  2. Posted: April 28, 2013In: Public

    After a young heiress unleashes primal powers, she is visited by a mysterious stranger and learns she must take on interdimensional beings that want her dead.

    jde Penpusher
    Added an answer on April 29, 2013 at 1:28 am

    She's supposed to be unleashing the primal powers from within. The kind of powers that will enable her to manipulate the energy that flows through all things. How can I show this in the logline? I think you're correct to leave out Mysterious Stranger. Thanks!

    She’s supposed to be unleashing the primal powers from within. The kind of powers that will enable her to manipulate the energy that flows through all things. How can I show this in the logline?

    I think you’re correct to leave out Mysterious Stranger.

    Thanks!

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  3. Posted: April 15, 2013In: Public

    During WW2, team of monsters led by Annabell Van Helsing must stop a group of Occult Nazis from resurrecting Dracula.

    jde Penpusher
    Added an answer on April 28, 2013 at 4:28 am

    What purpose would Dracula serve the Nazis? Also what is the tone of your screenplay?

    What purpose would Dracula serve the Nazis? Also what is the tone of your screenplay?

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