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  1. Posted: March 25, 2013In: Public

    The awakening of ancient powers in a young woman sparks an age-old war amongst mankind's original creators, over who controls the earth.

    jde Penpusher
    Added an answer on April 28, 2013 at 3:53 am

    I've been having a lot of difficulty with this logline. How does one get the story world into the logline? Or am I going about it the wrong way and should instead be focusing solely on character when devising the logline? When I look at the logline for the Matrix on imdb it seems a bit vague to me:Read more

    I’ve been having a lot of difficulty with this logline. How does one get the story world into the logline? Or am I going about it the wrong way and should instead be focusing solely on character when devising the logline?

    When I look at the logline for the Matrix on imdb it seems a bit vague to me: “A computer hacker learns from mysterious rebels about the true nature of his reality and his role in the war against its controllers.”

    I’m thinking I probably should leave out the story world and strictly focus on the players involved and create a screenplay that keeps you guessing at the nature of the conflict.

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  2. Posted: January 6, 2013In: Public

    A young artist struggles with her newfound spiritual powers after being visited by the angel of prophetic revelation.

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    Added an answer on January 6, 2013 at 2:34 pm

    Thank you for the comment Bryson. She has to learn how to deal with her powers because she will be the world's guardian during a cosmic war that is coming to earth, hence her being approached by the angel of prophecy. I originally started the logline for this screenplay idea in a different thread anRead more

    Thank you for the comment Bryson.

    She has to learn how to deal with her powers because she will be the world’s guardian during a cosmic war that is coming to earth, hence her being approached by the angel of prophecy.

    I originally started the logline for this screenplay idea in a different thread and went with the suggestion that it would be best not to mention the cosmic war part, since it’s overused in popular culture.

    I’m thinking the purpose of her powers should be a mystery that unfolds itself in the actual screenplay, culminating in the third act.

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  3. Posted: January 6, 2013In: Public

    A young artist struggles with her newfound spiritual powers after being visited by the angel of prophetic revelation.

    jde Penpusher
    Added an answer on January 6, 2013 at 2:26 pm

    That was in reply to Richiev.

    That was in reply to Richiev.

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