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  1. Posted: July 28, 2013In: Public

    When the objects, acting in concert worldwide, start refusing to help with bad actions for no apparent reason, it becomes the hell on earth for bad people but not yet heaven for the others. Will we be able to understand what things want to teach us: a lesson in humanity?

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Penpusher
    Added an answer on July 29, 2013 at 11:42 pm

    Hi Andrewclau, Hi danielarmour, You're right! And it is also too long. Is this better please? "After the objects start refusing to be part of bad actions all over the World, It?s a long journey for people to make it a heaven"

    Hi Andrewclau,
    Hi danielarmour,

    You’re right!
    And it is also too long.

    Is this better please?

    “After the objects start refusing to be part of bad actions all over the World, It?s a long journey for people to make it a heaven”

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  2. Posted: July 28, 2013In: Public

    When the objects, acting in concert worldwide, start refusing to help with bad actions for no apparent reason, it becomes the hell on earth for bad people but not yet heaven for the others. Will we be able to understand what things want to teach us: a lesson in humanity?

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Penpusher
    Added an answer on July 28, 2013 at 9:42 pm

    Hello Friends, Glad to be back. This refers to my precedent post on June 6

    Hello Friends,

    Glad to be back.

    This refers to my precedent post on June 6

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  3. Posted: June 10, 2013In: Public

    Abandoned with her two children in a large dismal house, a young woman must fight against ghosts until one day when …

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 20, 2013 at 6:13 pm

    Hello phoenixx50, Thank you for your post. This story is about a fight between livings and ghosts, but what happens after "when" cannot be told in the logline. The Others in an existing movie(+++) with Nicole Kidman. This logline is not the official one. I just wrote it quicly to introduce the topicRead more

    Hello phoenixx50,

    Thank you for your post.

    This story is about a fight between livings and ghosts, but what happens after “when” cannot be told in the logline.

    The Others in an existing movie(+++) with Nicole Kidman.

    This logline is not the official one. I just wrote it quicly to introduce the topic. The goal is to write a good one. Are you interested?

    if you have not already seen it and you want to know more about it, I recommend you don’t read any summary before you watch it.

    All the best

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