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A disillusioned real estate developer vows to protect the residents of Almiiitey who believe they will be saved from his company?s plans for their future by a spirit from their past.
Hi Almiiitey, This is very interesting because it can give substance and a fantastical dimension to your story. There are many good things to enrich it: - The attorney must gradually discover this legend/story parallel to the course of the events - That spirit is real and intervenes in history despiRead more
Hi Almiiitey,
This is very interesting because it can give substance and a fantastical dimension to your story. There are many good things to enrich it:
– The attorney must gradually discover this legend/story parallel to the course of the events
– That spirit is real and intervenes in history despite the incredulity of the attorney (initially it will be an obstacle, then it will become help while remaining eerie until resolution)
– The villains are descendants of this man by another line (children born from a subsequent marriage or avanture)
– The baby survived his mother, then has himself descendants who also become protagonists.
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You can develop one or two subplot about the past to increase mystery and unease.
At this point, nothing is written. If you feel that you can, write it. If you’re not interested, tell me. I’ll write it. If it interests you but you cannot do it, we can develop together.
There is something smelling like “Sleepy Hollow” which is fascinating and could be placed today.
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Hi Tony, I think that "DEMAIN JE ME TUE" is a good story. What I know about it is that it is inpired from a real story of collective suicide in Japan, several years ago. BLuecat is one of the most serious contests. I don't know if it is on the way to be produced. About me, I have no feedback for nowRead more
Hi Tony,
I think that “DEMAIN JE ME TUE” is a good story. What I know about it is that it is inpired from a real story of collective suicide in Japan, several years ago. BLuecat is one of the most serious contests.
I don’t know if it is on the way to be produced.
About me, I have no feedback for now from people who have asked me for my logline (3 producers and one director).
Maybe hoping to see Alice Ashton on screen increased from 1 chance in 10.000 to 1 in 500 chance?
Wait and see …
Do you subscribe to feedback when you enter a contest ?
I do, and it helped me to improve this story. I started in March 2012 and I rewrote a lot of things before entering Screenplay Festival in May. Alice Ashton entered five contests last year ( Page, Nicholl, Cynosure SF and Bluecat). An other good help was the feedback from my proofreader translator.
And also, if your first reader is interested by your story, it is a good luck.
Since then, I still have rewritten a lot. If I had no response about my logline, i’ll enter some more contests this summer (Bluecat + others)
Reading what I wrote in the spots above, I see a lot of mistakes (grammar, spelling,…) I apologize!
Kind regards.
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