1. Posted: May 20, 2013In:

    A murdered chess champion challenges heaven to save her brother from becoming her killer?s next victim.

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Penpusher

    Hi Almiiitey, I didn't find this new logline on logline.It I would be happy to read it. Thanks

    Hi Almiiitey,

    I didn’t find this new logline on logline.It
    I would be happy to read it.

    Thanks

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  2. Posted: May 25, 2013In:

    Street Crime UK meets Spring Heeled Jack!

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Penpusher

    Hi Soate This sounds like a pitch, not like a logline.

    Hi Soate

    This sounds like a pitch, not like a logline.

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  3. Posted: May 20, 2013In:

    A disillusioned real estate developer vows to protect the residents of Almiiitey who believe they will be saved from his company?s plans for their future by a spirit from their past.

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Penpusher

    Maybe it is better like that. Please excuse my english mistakes. :-) "A skeptical attorney, trying to protect against his company?s plans the Almiiitey community, is brought to work with a spirit from its past which needs to wreak revenge on the company owners? (33words)

    Maybe it is better like that. Please excuse my english mistakes. 🙂

    “A skeptical attorney, trying to protect against his company?s plans the Almiiitey community, is brought to work with a spirit from its past which needs to wreak revenge on the company owners?
    (33words)

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