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  1. Posted: October 28, 2013In: Public

    When looking for something to do on a dull Friday night, 5 friends find a radioactive rock in the woods, which could grant them anything for a limited amount of time. Now, they must protect the rock and themselves from the government.

    Screenwriters Anonymous
    Added an answer on October 28, 2013 at 8:50 pm

    I agree with NB ... omit "On another boring Friday night". Good observation NB!

    I agree with NB … omit “On another boring Friday night”. Good observation NB!

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  2. Posted: October 26, 2013In: Public

    When the overbearing family of a recently deceased young woman refuses to acknowledge her undocumented funeral wishes, her lackadaisical boyfriend must dig up the body in the middle of the night and embark on an odyssey to give her the burial she wanted, finally learning to fully appreciate her along the way.

    Screenwriters Anonymous
    Added an answer on October 28, 2013 at 10:03 am

    Better yet - omit the "near" death since that just defeats the purpose of making it suspenseful. A listless teenager digs up his deceased girlfriend?s body to properly respect her burial wishes after her terrorizing hauntings make him welcome death." Or something along those lines .... Would help toRead more

    Better yet – omit the “near” death since that just defeats the purpose of making it suspenseful.

    A listless teenager digs up his deceased girlfriend?s body to properly respect her burial wishes after her terrorizing hauntings make him welcome death.” Or something along those lines ….

    Would help to know the genre that the writer seeks.

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  3. Posted: October 26, 2013In: Public

    When the overbearing family of a recently deceased young woman refuses to acknowledge her undocumented funeral wishes, her lackadaisical boyfriend must dig up the body in the middle of the night and embark on an odyssey to give her the burial she wanted, finally learning to fully appreciate her along the way.

    Screenwriters Anonymous
    Added an answer on October 28, 2013 at 9:55 am

    How's this? (This isn't even my logline haha): A listless teenager digs up his deceased girlfriend?s body to properly respect her burial wishes after her terrorizing hauntings bring him to near death.?

    How’s this? (This isn’t even my logline haha):

    A listless teenager digs up his deceased girlfriend?s body to properly respect her burial wishes after her terrorizing hauntings bring him to near death.?

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