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  1. Posted: October 28, 2013In: Public

    When looking for something to do on a dull Friday night, 5 friends find a radioactive rock in the woods, which could grant them anything for a limited amount of time. Now, they must protect the rock and themselves from the government.

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    Added an answer on October 28, 2013 at 6:56 am

    I posted a reply earlier, but for some reason it didn't do it. So I'm trying to remember what I wrote. I love this idea because it can go in any direction your wild imagination will allow. Here's a clean up and suggestions to consider: "On another boring Friday night five college friends stumble upoRead more

    I posted a reply earlier, but for some reason it didn’t do it. So I’m trying to remember what I wrote. I love this idea because it can go in any direction your wild imagination will allow. Here’s a clean up and suggestions to consider:

    “On another boring Friday night five college friends stumble upon a radioactive rock that grants wishes, but for only a brief time. Now they must protect the powers of this unearthly rock and themselves from __________________.”

    The antagonist will determine the genre of your story. For instance:

    1. A government syndicate like the “Axis Powers” (Germany, Italy, Japan during WWII) will give a point in time reference while providing the urgency of their mission using this historical significance. >> Action/Adventure

    2. A war-mongering weapons manufacturer led by a vindictive executive. >> Thriller

    3. Their significant others (i.e., boyfriends, girlfriends, spouses) >> Comedy

    4. Or the second sentence could read, “But now they must protect the powers of this unearthly rock from each other.” >> Horror?

    I’d like to hear your thoughts and would like to read your revisions. Feel free to repost here or contact me directly via Twitter (@ScreenwritersSA).

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  2. Posted: October 20, 2013In: Public

    A self-absorbed teenager, who joins a Special Species Government Organisation, has to protect a rare tiger from a relentless, reptilian poacher.

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    Added an answer on October 20, 2013 at 9:01 pm

    Why is a tiger in danger from a reptilian poacher? I would think a turtle, snake, or lizard ... or you can change the poacher into an infamous game hunter.

    Why is a tiger in danger from a reptilian poacher? I would think a turtle, snake, or lizard … or you can change the poacher into an infamous game hunter.

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  3. Posted: October 8, 2013In: Public

    When an underprivileged Pakistani boy is murdered by his richer and more influential counterpart, his friends set on a journey to seek justice in a corrupt world designed to protect those in power. But is it justice they seek or revenge?

    Screenwriters Anonymous
    Added an answer on October 14, 2013 at 7:58 am

    For some reason my placeholders for (NAME) were omitted because I used brackets: "Based on the true story of (NAME), a young atty, ...."

    For some reason my placeholders for (NAME) were omitted because I used brackets:

    “Based on the true story of (NAME), a young atty, ….”

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