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A college playboy infatuated with a celibate young woman chooses to pursue abstinence in order to win her heart, Temptation however causes him to perpetually fall as he struggles to keep his new-found faith.
Sorry - and forgot to add that you have an element of conflict in there, too ... with the "struggle" to win over the virgin as well as fend off all temptations.
Sorry – and forgot to add that you have an element of conflict in there, too … with the “struggle” to win over the virgin as well as fend off all temptations.
See lessA college playboy infatuated with a celibate young woman chooses to pursue abstinence in order to win her heart, Temptation however causes him to perpetually fall as he struggles to keep his new-found faith.
Too long - shrink down to one sentence that has irony, conflict, or perhaps both. You've nailed irony by contrasting "playboy" with "celibate" & "abstinence". So here's my recommendation, which may or may not resonate with you: "Choosing abstinence over his playboy lifestyle, a college senior stRead more
Too long – shrink down to one sentence that has irony, conflict, or perhaps both. You’ve nailed irony by contrasting “playboy” with “celibate” & “abstinence”. So here’s my recommendation, which may or may not resonate with you: “Choosing abstinence over his playboy lifestyle, a college senior struggles to win the heart of a celibate underclassman.”
See lessA young mineworker with considerable magical powers, yearning for a better life, manages to gain an apprenticeship with a dark group of wizards, and soon learns that finding personal happiness entails as many deadly perils as choosing sides in the struggles between power-hungry factions.
Awesome! Run with it! :-)
Awesome! Run with it! 🙂
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