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In a small Nevada town, a homeschooling teenager emerges from hiding to play varsity basketball only to be bullied when it is discovered that his mother works in the local brothel.
+1 on him being as the Event of the story. "When a reclusive varsity basketball player is outed as the bastard son of a prostitute, he must....."
+1 on him being as the Event of the story. “When a reclusive varsity basketball player is outed as the bastard son of a prostitute, he must…..”
See lessWhen a group of holidaying students wake up to find themselves buried up to their necks on an isolated beach amidst the rising tide, they are left with nothing but a note telling them they are being watched, and among them is a mole. They must figure out who that is if they want to survive.
Just spit balling this one, I like the premise a lot but am struggling to come up with a compelling action that helps them escape. They are after all incapacitated. Any helps/tips would be greatly appreciated.
Just spit balling this one, I like the premise a lot but am struggling to come up with a compelling action that helps them escape. They are after all incapacitated. Any helps/tips would be greatly appreciated.
See lessWhen an abducted news reporter?s ransom remains unpaid, her timid stalker must infiltrate a ruthless kidnapping ring before she?s executed.
ITERATION #1: ?When an abducted news reporter?s ransom remains unpaid, her timid stalker must track down the ruthless kidnappers before she?s executed. I think by simplifying the action from 'infiltrating a kidnapping ring' to 'tracking them down' makes it clearer who the protagonist is... I've alsoRead more
ITERATION #1: ?When an abducted news reporter?s ransom remains unpaid, her timid stalker must track down the ruthless kidnappers before she?s executed.
I think by simplifying the action from ‘infiltrating a kidnapping ring’ to ‘tracking them down’ makes it clearer who the protagonist is…
See lessI’ve also referred to the news reporter twice with the words HER and SHE’s, this might also be causing some confusion. but the main character is the stalker.