1. Posted: March 6, 2016In:

    While working under cover on a state-of-the-art submarine, a United States government agent learns that her former husband intends to ?terminate her with extreme prejudice?.

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    I like it, but need to know what "terminate her with extreme prejudice" is specifically, and does her being on a submarine tie into that? It would work best if it did.

    I like it, but need to know what “terminate her with extreme prejudice” is specifically, and does her being on a submarine tie into that? It would work best if it did.

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  2. Posted: February 16, 2016In:

    Succesful lawer from Moscaw is obsessed with an american porn star, all attemts to meet her in person fail untill a brilliant idea comes to his mind to press charges against her.

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    Thank you so much for the critique, now i see i got it wrong. So the story goes around a very ambisious lawer, who not only obsessed personally with the porn star but also seeking for professional success and recognision. So when the porn star arrives to Moscaw for a film shoot he uses his talent toRead more

    Thank you so much for the critique, now i see i got it wrong. So the story goes around a very ambisious lawer, who not only obsessed personally with the porn star but also seeking for professional success and recognision. So when the porn star arrives to Moscaw for a film shoot he uses his talent to find a way to put her in court not only to meet her but also to attract all media attention to provoke a scandal to get free advertizing.

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  3. Posted: February 13, 2016In:

    Still living with mother, a 45 year old psychotherapist that uses a dubious flogging therapy struggles to make his own life proposing to his client, a young and rich business woman.

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    Thanks for reviewing, i am from russia and my english is not that good, so i am just trying to learn this logline thing. the flogging therapy is something that invented and developed by a russian professor Sergey Speranskiy and now is popular in russia. Because the main character is unsuccessful manRead more

    Thanks for reviewing, i am from russia and my english is not that good, so i am just trying to learn this logline thing. the flogging therapy is something that invented and developed by a russian professor Sergey Speranskiy and now is popular in russia. Because the main character is unsuccessful man, still lives with his mother, never married, no children, ?he doesnt give up trying ?to find a woman and to create family like his twin brother. His client, a rich woman that showed interest towards him and ?his strange method seems a good solution to him. they?have very passionate relationship. She uses him to satisfy her sexual desires, and he tries to take advantage… to fix his life using her.

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