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A brother and a sister takes care of each other in an abusive home an because of this a special bond is created between them, like symbiosis, one thing that can not live without another
Who is the main character? "Takes care of each other" is not interesting enough to expect people buy a ticket to see it. The abuse won't help either, it will rather turn more people away. "a special bond" sounds like the relationship twins often have, so it is not unique. How can you make it uniqueRead more
Who is the main character?
“Takes care of each other” is not interesting enough to expect people buy a ticket to see it. The abuse won’t help either, it will rather turn more people away.
“a special bond” sounds like the relationship twins often have, so it is not unique. How can you make it unique and interesting for a film?
The concept needs some work, or else we need more detail…
Good luck!
See lessDriven to sea by a father with a murderous past, a Viking prince is pursued by the gods and a dark temptress in his quest for redemption.
I like it... So the Viking prince is the main character - but why does he need to redeem himself? The goal seems to be to stay out of the hands of the gods and the dark temptress. Now, this is an open goal and must be closed at the mid point. So how does the story change from there? Also, we are truRead more
I like it…
So the Viking prince is the main character – but why does he need to redeem himself?
The goal seems to be to stay out of the hands of the gods and the dark temptress. Now, this is an open goal and must be closed at the mid point. So how does the story change from there?
Also, we are trusting that the antagonism offered by the father’s murderous past, the gods and the temptress is in some way related. Is it possible to bring this into the logline?
It sounds like a complex story and therefore a challenge to fit it all in. But it shouldn’t be impossible!
See lessSet in LA. A former commercial writer will prove to his friends his comeback to the world, starting by being an escort.
Sounds saucy and fun! Should I take "former" as "failed"? It sounds like that's his burden. Now there are two things that still bug me: 1. How did it all start? What is the inciting incident? Is it the event that created his downfall? 2. "prove ... his comeback to the world" - can you be more specifRead more
Sounds saucy and fun!
Should I take “former” as “failed”? It sounds like that’s his burden.
Now there are two things that still bug me:
1. How did it all start? What is the inciting incident? Is it the event that created his downfall?
2. “prove … his comeback to the world” – can you be more specific? What is the visible goal here?
Keen to hear where you’ll take this…
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