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  1. Posted: November 21, 2012In: Public

    A BIOLOGICAL WEAPON MANUFACTURING COMPANY WHICH DISGUISE AS A PHARMACTICAL COMPANY TEST THEIR WORKS ON PEOPLE WITH DISASTEROUS EFFECT.

    Karel Segers Logliner
    Added an answer on November 22, 2012 at 5:15 pm

    John, you have posted 3 loglines. Can you please - in the spirit of this site - review 2 loglines for each (i.e. 8 loglines in total)? Please also post loglines in normal, mixed case. ALL CAPS LOOKS VERY BAD.

    John, you have posted 3 loglines. Can you please – in the spirit of this site – review 2 loglines for each (i.e. 8 loglines in total)?

    Please also post loglines in normal, mixed case. ALL CAPS LOOKS VERY BAD.

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  2. Posted: November 1, 2012In: Public

    After falling for the woman who defrauded his company, a now bankrupt playboy hatches the perfect plan to win her heart: he'll bust her out of prison.

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    Added an answer on November 14, 2012 at 9:21 pm

    Hmmm... It sounds like there's a good story in there but I'm not getting it completely. I can see what Act 2 is about: he's trying to get her out of prison. But where does the story really start? With the fraude - or the falling in love? Romantic films need to give the heroes plenty of opportunity tRead more

    Hmmm… It sounds like there’s a good story in there but I’m not getting it completely.

    I can see what Act 2 is about: he’s trying to get her out of prison. But where does the story really start? With the fraude – or the falling in love?

    Romantic films need to give the heroes plenty of opportunity to share the screen. Is this the case here? I understand that she is going to be in prison for all of Act 2, while he is on the outside… May be a problem.

    Finally: are we going to believe that love has anything to do with doing someone a favor?

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  3. Posted: November 1, 2012In: Public

    A frazzled man's secret lives are set to collide when he discovers his wife has invited everyone he knows to his surprise 40th birthday.

    Karel Segers Logliner
    Added an answer on November 14, 2012 at 9:17 pm

    The promise of this movie is based on a secret we are not let in on. This never works. What we do know is that this man finds out he gets a surprise party. Big deal. What should the viewer expect to see in Act 2? Is this a comedy? Then what is our hero's main problem during Act 2? What does he try tRead more

    The promise of this movie is based on a secret we are not let in on. This never works.

    What we do know is that this man finds out he gets a surprise party. Big deal.

    What should the viewer expect to see in Act 2? Is this a comedy? Then what is our hero’s main problem during Act 2? What does he try to achieve or prevent?

    We need to know more.

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