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  1. Posted: March 19, 2016In: Examples, Horror

    When a teenage girl is relentlessly followed by an unknown supernatural figure after a sexual encounter, she must have sex with someone new to stop it from following, and ultimately killing her.

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    Added an answer on April 30, 2016 at 7:05 pm

    EDIT:?After a sexual encounter, a teenage girl realizes she is being followed by a ghastly shapeshifter, and must retain a distance from it to stay alive, or sleep with someone new to pass on the deadly curse. This movie really deserves a sequel.

    EDIT:?After a sexual encounter, a teenage girl realizes she is being followed by a ghastly shapeshifter, and must retain a distance from it to stay alive, or sleep with someone new to pass on the deadly curse.

    This movie really deserves a sequel.

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  2. Posted: April 30, 2016In: Thriller

    When one of his tenants is found murdered, a young and na?ve landlord must find a killer lurking in a secret part of the building, or risk bankruptcy.

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    Added an answer on April 30, 2016 at 6:45 pm

    Thanks Richie. Well he's young 20-23ish, so I think that's more important than their psychology (naive - which as you said is one and the same with youth). Re: BANKRUPTCY/stakes. You've brought up exactly what I wanted brought up. The obvious stakes (like JAWS) would be "to stop the killing" ?Yes, tRead more

    Thanks Richie.

    Well he’s young 20-23ish, so I think that’s more important than their psychology (naive – which as you said is one and the same with youth).

    Re: BANKRUPTCY/stakes. You’ve brought up exactly what I wanted brought up. The obvious stakes (like JAWS) would be “to stop the killing” ?Yes, the young landlord does want to stop the killings, but I find that obvious and slightly bland. His desire is a financial one, he works overtime to ensure his building has a positive cash flow. Once there’s a murder or two, tenants will have grounds to break their leases. They’ll leave coursing vacancies which makes the building lose money. Also, I don’t know a lot about real estate yet, but I imagine having a murderer in the building decreases the value of the property – and that’s what the landlord wants to avoid/decrease. He needs to stop the killer, to essentially save his financial investment in it.

    That’s what I want in the stakes, and I agree, “risk bankruptcy” doesn’t quite establish this. if someone reading this can offer their feedback, I’d be much appreciative 🙂

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  3. Posted: April 9, 2016In: Drama

    When a teenager loots methamphetamine from a crime scene, he must sell to it to pay for his dads failing business before the owner, a psychopathic cop, hunts him down.

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    Added an answer on April 10, 2016 at 4:32 am

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