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  1. Posted: March 30, 2016In: Thriller

    When a doctor learns he has a kill-mate, a stranger that will be triggered to kill him if they cross paths, he must plot their murder, or risk a deadly encounter.

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    Added an answer on March 31, 2016 at 9:38 am

    I have to say I prefer them both being 'good' people in society. I favour the antagonist being a whistleblower, but being an evil CEO that people would like to see dead just because of his socio-economic standing bores me a bit. Think of the wholesome people Walter White was willing to kill, he hadRead more

    I have to say I prefer them both being ‘good’ people in society. I favour the antagonist being a whistleblower, but being an evil CEO that people would like to see dead just because of his socio-economic standing bores me a bit. Think of the wholesome people Walter White was willing to kill, he had us on the edge of our seats.

    I like the mentor B plot part, I’ve always figured the MC to be newly married and maybe even have a kid on the way or have a young child at home, and he starts neglecting them to search for the killer.

    Not sure about a twist ending, I’m not sure i have the writing chops to make it not sound like it’s a thriller circa 1998-2003.

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  2. Posted: March 30, 2016In: Thriller

    When a doctor learns he has a kill-mate, a stranger that will be triggered to kill him if they cross paths, he must plot their murder, or risk a deadly encounter.

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    Added an answer on March 30, 2016 at 10:53 pm

    I also want 1 main character. Both men being triggered to kill takes on the plot of a romance, where two people feel equal chemistry, therefore need equal screen time. You could argue that, but you get my point.

    I also want 1 main character. Both men being triggered to kill takes on the plot of a romance, where two people feel equal chemistry, therefore need equal screen time. You could argue that, but you get my point.

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  3. Posted: March 25, 2016In: Crime

    WHEN A YOUNG SKATER IS THREATENED WITH EVICTION, HE TURNS TO HIS RAG TAG GROUP OF FRIENDS TO HELP HIM PULL OFF A YUPPIE HEIST TO END THEM ALL. (CA$H)

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    Added an answer on March 30, 2016 at 8:20 pm

    I agree with Nir, as a skater myself, having skated for over 10 years, I can tell you that eviction isn't a big event for this demographic. I know some skaters that live off various friends couches on a kind of rotating roster. I also don't know any skaters that would plan a heist, especially if itRead more

    I agree with Nir, as a skater myself, having skated for over 10 years, I can tell you that eviction isn’t a big event for this demographic. I know some skaters that live off various friends couches on a kind of rotating roster. I also don’t know any skaters that would plan a heist, especially if it was just to prevent them from being evicted.

    Also, skateboarding in films works best if you cast real non-actor skaters. Look at KIDS and THE SMELL OF US by Larry Clark, that’s what he did, and it works well. This minimizes the cringe factor, and the cliches. Skater’s will actually mock the film if they are portrayed unrealistically.

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