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  1. Posted: September 23, 2017In: Noir

    After her rich husband and her lover are found murdered on her living room floor, a beautiful woman must prove her innocence to avoid being murdered by the police while in custody.

    kbfilmworks Samurai
    Added an answer on September 26, 2017 at 3:07 am

    dpg: I like speculating about stuff as much as anyone but a lot of the stuff that's being said here does not help to improve the logline in my view. Nir Shelter was out of order. We're here to improve loglines. If anyone thinks the subject matter is boring or the structure is moribund, etc. then theRead more

    dpg:

    I like speculating about stuff as much as anyone but a lot of the stuff that’s being said here does not help to improve the logline in my view.

    Nir Shelter was out of order. We’re here to improve loglines. If anyone thinks the subject matter is boring or the structure is moribund, etc. then there are plenty of other loglines that might be more deserving of comment.

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  2. Posted: September 23, 2017In: Noir

    After her rich husband and her lover are found murdered on her living room floor, a beautiful woman must prove her innocence to avoid being murdered by the police while in custody.

    kbfilmworks Samurai
    Added an answer on September 25, 2017 at 9:37 pm

    Nir Shelter"Vigilante cops are very hard to buy as a viewer", etc.When you make a sweeping statement like this you had better be quoting a visionary film-maker like Martin Scorsese or someone similar. If this is simply your own personal opinion transcribed into screenwriting dogma then it smacks ofRead more

    Nir Shelter

    “Vigilante cops are very hard to buy as a viewer”, etc.

    When you make a sweeping statement like this you had better be quoting a visionary film-maker like Martin Scorsese or someone similar. If this is simply your own personal opinion transcribed into screenwriting dogma then it smacks of a level of arrogance that actually scares me. ?Don’t you know that dogma is an anathema to creativity?

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  3. Posted: September 23, 2017In: Noir

    After her rich husband and her lover are found murdered on her living room floor, a beautiful woman must prove her innocence to avoid being murdered by the police while in custody.

    kbfilmworks Samurai
    Added an answer on September 25, 2017 at 7:21 am

    "After her rich husband and her lover are found murdered on her living room floor, a beautiful woman must prove her innocence while in police custody to avoid being murdered by a pair of vigilante cops".

    “After her rich husband and her lover are found murdered on her living room floor, a beautiful woman must prove her innocence while in police custody to avoid being murdered by a pair of vigilante cops”.

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