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When her husband and the lawyer she blames for her sister?s death are found murdered, a battered woman struggles to prove her innocence after the Police discover her plan to get her violently jealous husband to murder the lawyer in order to free herself from her marriage.
Many thanks, Richiev. Here is my latest iteration which blends your first version with mine.When her violently jealous husband and the corrupt lawyer she blames for her sister?s death are both found murdered, a battered housewife must prove her innocence because all evidence is pointing towards herRead more
Many thanks, Richiev. Here is my latest iteration which blends your first version with mine.
When her violently jealous husband and the corrupt lawyer she blames for her sister?s death are both found murdered, a battered housewife must prove her innocence because all evidence is pointing towards her guilt.
See lessWhen her husband and the lawyer she blames for her sister?s death are found murdered, a battered woman struggles to prove her innocence after the Police discover her plan to get her violently jealous husband to murder the lawyer in order to free herself from her marriage.
Richiev, I take your point. I think what makes the logline fascinating is the 'killing two birds with one stone' scheme. Otherwise it's a pretty run-of-the-mill genre story about an aggrieved woman who may or may not be guilty of her husband's murder. I agree that the logline is long and I'm open toRead more
Richiev, I take your point. I think what makes the logline fascinating is the ‘killing two birds with one stone’ scheme. Otherwise it’s a pretty run-of-the-mill genre story about an aggrieved woman who may or may not be guilty of her husband’s murder.
I agree that the logline is long and I’m open to improving it. I’ve seen some pretty long marketing loglines for scripts that got sold so I don’t think length alone is an issue.
I think I’m going to say ” must prove her innocence’ rather than struggles to prove her innocence ‘ because the Police believe they can secure a conviction on the basis that she planned a murder and so they can establish motive, means and opportunity.
See lessWhen a young and idealistic police negotiator is promoted he must face his manipulator predecessor and instructor, who has been expelled by a scandal and under threat of jail has kidnapped his wife and a group of people at the airport to flee out of the country.
An idealistic young Police negotiator is torn between duty and gratitude when he confronts a kidnapper and hostage taker who happens to be his mentor and former instructor. Your logline suggests that you are torn between prioritizing character relationships or action/thriller elements. Michael MannRead more
An idealistic young Police negotiator is torn between duty and gratitude when he confronts a kidnapper and hostage taker who happens to be his mentor and former instructor.
Your logline suggests that you are torn between prioritizing character relationships or action/thriller elements. Michael Mann was able to do both in ‘Heat’, which is what makes it a masterpiece. Obviously, it didn’t hurt to have 2 of the all-time greatest actors playing opposite each other.
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