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  1. Posted: October 6, 2015In: Action

    A female bounty hunter who hallucinates slices of the future saves a man?s life in order to collect the bounty on his violent time-travelling future self.

    kbfilmworks Samurai
    Added an answer on October 6, 2015 at 8:29 am

    Thanks, StellaAurora. I'm trying to keep it short and intriguing while hinting that it's a mind-bending action flick. ?

    Thanks, StellaAurora. I’m trying to keep it short and intriguing while hinting that it’s a mind-bending action flick.

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  2. Posted: October 6, 2015In: Action

    A female bounty hunter who hallucinates slices of the future saves a man?s life in order to collect the bounty on his violent time-travelling future self.

    kbfilmworks Samurai
    Added an answer on October 6, 2015 at 8:03 am

    Thanks, dpg. I don't want to use the word 'precognitive' cos it's not in common usage so 'hallucinates slices of the future' is what I'm working with at the moment. What she does is 'see flashes of the future' but I like hallucinates better because it indicates it's a special ability which is outsidRead more

    Thanks, dpg. I don’t want to use the word ‘precognitive’ cos it’s not in common usage so ‘hallucinates slices of the future’ is what I’m working with at the moment. What she does is ‘see flashes of the future’ but I like hallucinates better because it indicates it’s a special ability which is outside her control.

    The story is about what happens after she saves him and also explores the relationship between the innocent younger self and the violent future self that needs the help of his younger self to stay alive.

    So, the action plot is about the bounty hunter using the younger self as bait to trap the future self who also has a special ability. And, the emotional storyline is about the younger self and future self’s interactions as the younger guy tries to resolve his dilemma: letting his future self die means he limits his own lifespan but it’s no easier accepting that he lives on to become a killer.

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  3. Posted: October 2, 2015In: Examples

    When the passionate brother of the bland man she is engaged to marry falls madly in love with her, a woman must decide which man is right for her.

    kbfilmworks Samurai
    Added an answer on October 6, 2015 at 3:46 am

    "When an older man's young bride-in-waiting falls passionately in love with his rebellious younger brother, an Italian-American family finds itself on the verge of a crisis".

    “When an older man’s young bride-in-waiting falls passionately in love with his rebellious younger brother, an Italian-American family finds itself on the verge of a crisis”.

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