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Awaiting the arrival of a fugitive, a ruthless bounty hunter holds hostage the patrons of a sleazy bar but soon discovers the imminent arrival of another fugitive: a killer with advanced mental powers from an alternate reality.
Nice suggestion. My use of 'another' is ambiguous. I meant 'one more' and not 'instead of'. "A bounty hunter holds bar patrons hostage in order to trap a fugitive but when a killer with superpowers from an alternate reality also shows up the hunter becomes the hunted".
Nice suggestion. My use of ‘another’ is ambiguous. I meant ‘one more’ and not ‘instead of’.
“A bounty hunter holds bar patrons hostage in order to trap a fugitive but when a killer with superpowers from an alternate reality also shows up the hunter becomes the hunted”.
See lessAwaiting the arrival of a fugitive, a ruthless bounty hunter holds hostage the patrons of a sleazy bar but soon discovers the imminent arrival of another fugitive: a killer with advanced mental powers from an alternate reality.
Nice suggestion. My use of 'another' is ambiguous. I meant 'one more' and not 'instead of'. "A bounty hunter holds bar patrons hostage in order to trap a fugitive but when a killer with superpowers from an alternate reality also shows up the hunter becomes the hunted".
Nice suggestion. My use of ‘another’ is ambiguous. I meant ‘one more’ and not ‘instead of’.
“A bounty hunter holds bar patrons hostage in order to trap a fugitive but when a killer with superpowers from an alternate reality also shows up the hunter becomes the hunted”.
See lessAwaiting the arrival of a fugitive, a ruthless bounty hunter holds hostage the patrons of a sleazy bar but soon discovers the imminent arrival of another fugitive: a killer with advanced mental powers from an alternate reality.
Good questions. The bounty hunter's aim is to hold the bar patrons incommunicado in order to trap the fugitive. He gets help from an unexpected source and the fugitive killer has a weakness which the bounty hunter discovers. I'm thinking of describing him as 'legendary' rather than 'relentless' to uRead more
Good questions.
The bounty hunter’s aim is to hold the bar patrons incommunicado in order to trap the fugitive. He gets help from an unexpected source and the fugitive killer has a weakness which the bounty hunter discovers. I’m thinking of describing him as ‘legendary’ rather than ‘relentless’ to up his game.
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