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  1. Posted: December 29, 2017In: Fantasy

    “the sleight of hand”

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    Knightrider Mentor
    Added an answer on December 29, 2017 at 7:03 am

    I like Craig?s answer. I don?t think need to worry about the how in a logline, just the what. Which in this case he discovers wizards are real, they earn money as magicians. I think there is a real fun concept here as magicians never reveal their secrets and this is their biggest one.

    I like Craig?s answer. I don?t think need to worry about the how in a logline, just the what.

    Which in this case he discovers wizards are real, they earn money as magicians. I think there is a real fun concept here as magicians never reveal their secrets and this is their biggest one.

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  2. Posted: July 24, 2017In: SciFi

    When she is targeted by a rival tech firm for software code in her head, a closed off data courier with a photographic memory must finish her latest delivery to survive. Only problem: For some reason, she can’t remember ever accepting the job.

    Knightrider Mentor
    Added an answer on July 25, 2017 at 9:49 am

    I will begin rework end edit shortly

    I will begin rework end edit shortly

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  3. Posted: July 24, 2017In: SciFi

    When she is targeted by a rival tech firm for software code in her head, a closed off data courier with a photographic memory must finish her latest delivery to survive. Only problem: For some reason, she can’t remember ever accepting the job.

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    Added an answer on July 25, 2017 at 9:49 am

    Yeah I haven't conveyed this all that well. I guess, might point of difference would be now that I think about it is: She doesn't know she is a courier of dangerous data, she believes she is just a sales representative, but turns through hypnosis she doesn't have access to this information normally.Read more

    Yeah I haven’t conveyed this all that well. I guess, might point of difference would be now that I think about it is: She doesn’t know she is a courier of dangerous data, she believes she is just a sales representative, but turns through hypnosis she doesn’t have access to this information normally.

    However, she finds herself a target and thinks they are after the package she was sent to deliver as part of her job, but in actuality she is being hunted for what is in her head.

    I am toying with the idea that when under hypnotic suggestion she may also have access to a skill set, that makes her a bit more able to convincingly stand up for herself against trained agents.

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