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A college grad stuck in a dead-end job impersonates a tech ?it girl? in order to get hired at NYC?s hottest startup, but when the company is secretly in danger of folding without a game-changing new product, she learns she has more to offer as herself than she knew.
As above, your Logline isn't bad had some good irony, I can see the conflict, but maybe just say: but when she's put in charge of creating a game changing product to save the company, she must pretend she's the boss of a fake company to trick real IT whizz kids to create it for her. Basically, althoRead more
As above, your Logline isn’t bad had some good irony, I can see the conflict, but maybe just say: but when she’s put in charge of creating a game changing product to save the company, she must pretend she’s the boss of a fake company to trick real IT whizz kids to create it for her.
Basically, although I see the goal, I don’t get a sense of the conflict in act 2. So she learns she has a lot to offer, but that is the arc rather than the action that leads to the change
See lessAfter her employers die in a city wide pandemic an Upper West Side nanny must navigate the violent streets to save their young son and put him on the last boat to safety.
Not sure why the boy is so special, why should she save him and not others. Also, as mentioned, is the pandemic still killing people. I would maybe have her infected, but the child is immune and is wanted by those who'll control the cure and she needs to get him to someone who'll create the cure forRead more
Not sure why the boy is so special, why should she save him and not others. Also, as mentioned, is the pandemic still killing people.
I would maybe have her infected, but the child is immune and is wanted by those who’ll control the cure and she needs to get him to someone who’ll create the cure for free.
See less?Blamed for banishing the antichrist back to hell, a gang of demons must make their way across the city, as they fight through each territory, and the monsters that hold them down, to get back to their home turf, where they think they are safe.? ? THE FIENDS – by Judah Ray
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