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  1. Posted: November 7, 2016In: Thriller

    When a struggling reporter unknowingly steals a CIA hitman’s phone, he must save the next person on the hit list to expose a government cover up.

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    Added an answer on November 7, 2016 at 10:33 am

    Again another tweak of an older version, just been revisiting some old stories with fresh eyes. However, no more for a while as I am off to write reviews to pay for these posts :)

    Again another tweak of an older version, just been revisiting some old stories with fresh eyes. However, no more for a while as I am off to write reviews to pay for these posts 🙂

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  2. Posted: November 7, 2016In: SciFi

    When video game character’s gain self awareness and actually start killing the players, a young widow must complete the game to escape it.

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    Added an answer on November 7, 2016 at 10:22 am

    A tweaked version of a logline I did a while ago, I have recently comeback to the story and while the idea of a gaming world will be explored in Ready Player One, I still think my story is different enough and relevant given recent shows like WestWorld exploring AI and how we treat it coupled with tRead more

    A tweaked version of a logline I did a while ago, I have recently comeback to the story and while the idea of a gaming world will be explored in Ready Player One, I still think my story is different enough and relevant given recent shows like WestWorld exploring AI and how we treat it coupled with the continuous advancements in gaming technology.

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  3. Posted: October 30, 2016In: Horror

    After his best friend was used as a human sacrifice to protect a town from a mythical beast, a telepathic teenager must stop the cult from choosing his girlfriend next.

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    Added an answer on October 31, 2016 at 5:25 am

    I don't think you need the first bit, that seems like backstory as it is the selection of his girlfriend that sets the story in motion. So, my version would be something like: When his girlfriend is selected to be sacrificed to please a mythical beast, a telepathic teen must return with the head ofRead more

    I don’t think you need the first bit, that seems like backstory as it is the selection of his girlfriend that sets the story in motion.
    So, my version would be something like: When his girlfriend is selected to be sacrificed to please a mythical beast, a telepathic teen must return with the head of the beast before she loses her’s.

    It’s 27 words and a hit rough, but think it has a clearer goal, a ticking clock etc.

    As said you can throw the best mate bit in the setup section of the screenplay.

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