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The world is about to be destroyed by none other than an ordinary human, and the only one who knows about it is an unwillingly chosen fish.
If this were my logline, I'd focus more on character 'Fish'. "unwillingly chosen" implies a character of meek traits - just as Nemo was also unwillingly chosen. Theme feels to be embracing an environmental message: "Man unwittingly destroying earth/sea". A quick sketch logline for Nemo may read: "WhRead more
If this were my logline, I’d focus more on character ‘Fish’. “unwillingly chosen” implies a character of meek traits – just as Nemo was also unwillingly chosen.
Theme feels to be embracing an environmental message: “Man unwittingly destroying earth/sea”.
A quick sketch logline for Nemo may read: “When [an overly cautious clown fish], [discovers this son has been captured by deep sea divers], he must [save his son, and escape the dangers of a dentist’s fish tank]
“Dentist’s fish tank” maybe replaced with “ordinary human destruction” …
See lessA group of East London kids embark on a dangerous adventure, following in the footsteps of a Caribbean soldier from WW2, hoping to find the soldier’s hidden treasure and save their estate from demolition
Is this story about a ->brave<- young boy, who when "he learns his East London house estate home is earmarked for demolition" (-)Inciting Incident(-), must "find a soldier's hidden treasure" --> ((character goal driver)); in order to save his home (what's @STAKE!) ...? Trying to "cause andRead more
Is this story about a ->brave<- young boy, who when “he learns his East London house estate home is earmarked for demolition” (-)Inciting Incident(-), must “find a soldier’s hidden treasure” –> ((character goal driver)); in order to save his home (what’s @STAKE!) …?
Trying to “cause and effect” -> ‘must save home’ ++ ‘hidden treasure’ = problem might be resolved ….?
See lessA group of East London kids embark on a dangerous adventure, following in the footsteps of a Caribbean soldier from WW2, hoping to find the soldier’s hidden treasure and save their estate from demolition
Feels like quite an adventure! From East London, through to the Caribbean, and to save a (European?) Estate. Like this logline's sense of scale. However, who is the protagonist you are asking me to empathise with? ... East London Kids ... girls/boys? Teen, pre-puberty? The stereotype of an East LonRead more
Feels like quite an adventure! From East London, through to the Caribbean, and to save a (European?) Estate.
Like this logline’s sense of scale. However, who is the protagonist you are asking me to empathise with? … East London Kids … girls/boys? Teen, pre-puberty? The stereotype of an East Londoner only suggests Socio-Economic situation.
What psychological drama are you promising me to journey upon, though experiencing this world you have created through a “character’s” eyes?
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