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A Russian immigrant is searching for the answers of her life in the assassination of Boris Nemtsov, the most feared of Putin?s adversaries. She is finding much more than she ever hoped for.
Would you consider a more Cause and Effect approach? "When Putin?s most feared adversary, Boris Nemtsov, is assassinated, a Russian immigrant must ...." That is the 'Event' is the cause of the effect, or actions which must then be taken by protagonist. These actions are usually unexpected to the maiRead more
Would you consider a more Cause and Effect approach?
“When Putin?s most feared adversary, Boris Nemtsov, is assassinated, a Russian immigrant must ….”
That is the ‘Event’ is the cause of the effect, or actions which must then be taken by protagonist. These actions are usually unexpected to the main character? (but don’t have to be).? For best results the events cause character to reveal deepest flaw – i.e. made to feel most vulnerable.
See lessWhen her mother is convicted as a paedophile, a 16-year-old girl struggles with therapy, high-school, and an overnight change in how she is seen by society as she seeks to be legally emancipated.
Nice work! So we have one young female protagonist, one sexually messed up mother, who then causes our protagonist to be highly motivated to seek relief from the situation. A middle-aged woman convicted of paedophilia is a very original concept, mostly because it breaks with the stereotype. SwappingRead more
Nice work! So we have one young female protagonist, one sexually messed up mother, who then causes our protagonist to be highly motivated to seek relief from the situation.
A middle-aged woman convicted of paedophilia is a very original concept, mostly because it breaks with the stereotype. Swapping the antagonist character for a male of course implies incest.
While such a setup suggests much psychology, what might be the character flaw of the young girl be? Is she simply meek and lacking courage?
See lessWhen he finds a cowardly family-man accidentally locked in their 9-way assassin?s battle royale to win a contract paying enough to retire with, a moral veteran must keep him alive whilst eliminating the competition.
Thumbs up - can see how suggestions helped. Had the "Ah, I get it now" moment. So protagonist is the Assassin - much cooler! And cowardly/accountant/family-guy is the Victim and Boon (prize)... motivating primary character action during oppositional battle royale conflict. Any psychological dimensioRead more
Thumbs up – can see how suggestions helped.
Had the “Ah, I get it now” moment. So protagonist is the Assassin – much cooler! And cowardly/accountant/family-guy is the Victim and Boon (prize)… motivating primary character action during oppositional battle royale conflict.
Any psychological dimension to our assassin? No one’s perfect, we all have our faults. Maybe if he is a venten, then he has some unresolved past … Could help character be more likeable.
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