?think Pygmalion/Lolita? What I?ve done is actually quite common. I?m trying to say a lot in a few words. Are you saying that you don?t think it serves its intended purpose or that it doesn?t conform to some rule or other?

They travel the country by car. Why would she need a visa? So far I haven’t been able to find anything to suggest she would need one. I’ll ask my sister who lives over there with her American husband and American son.

It’s set in the present day – I would have stated otherwise. I’m trying to write to appeal to all four demographics. He’s decided to take a semester off work after his father’s death and his best friend’s marriage. Once he’s with her, he stays on for a while. If I put all this stuff in the logline, it’ll be too wordy.